Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

I like to read a book that flows without noticing errors or inconsistencies. In this book, it seemed every 10 pages or so there was some issue - examples include: - A publicly trade SEC registrant with 3 employees - really? - Condensation instead of condescension? - The protagonist doesn't know that Eddie is a women - except two pages later we find out her ex described her as like a 'crazy aunt'? I read for enjoyment and entertainment and don't want to be on the lookout for errors. I guess you get what you pay for - which in this case - was zero as it was an Amazon Kindle Freebie...