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Hard to read
I just finished this book and while I mostly enjoyed the story it became very hard to follow and read. I can't imagine how hard it is to write a book and get it published but the typos, missing words and double words makes reading difficult. Not to mention that the action changes from one sentence to the next. In one chapter the fathers name changes to James instead of Jason. She is wearing a tank top, cut offs and flip flops but he pushes her skirt up to her waist. He has her pinned against the sink with both hands holding the counter but his back is against the door locking it and then he is striding towards her. This is just a few of the problems throughout the book and it seriously takes away from the storyline plus the timeline seems to be off. I am a person who reads every word and when I have to keep turning pages cause it seems like I jumped a chapter cause what is written it different then the sentence above. Even in the bonus chapter-Remi picks up Phoenix to wipe his face but JJ doesn't wake up when his face is wiped.
November 2018 · Kindle Store · verified purchase
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