Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

Every thought, every emotion, every twitch each character experiences is detailed in page-long paragraphs: "He got the bread out of the blue bag, he put 2 slices in the toaster, he pushed down the "toast" button, all the while wishing his vanished wife was with him, her blond hair, her twinkling eyes... the toast popped out and he put it on a plate and buttered it, then he sliced both pieces in half, and took it to the table where he carefully set it down next to the bowl of cereal and the blue coffee mug, which needed a refill. He picked up the coffee pot and poured hot coffee into the half-empty mug...." Ay-yi-yi. Get on with the STORY. Cut out the interminable filler and you might have a pretty interesting short story about traveling to parallel universes.