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The premise of this book was somewhat interesting, but it was completely ruined by the execution and the shallow characters. The book was absolutely filled with grammatical errors and super-annoying complex sentences. It's never "Maddox punched her bare stomach with his left hand," it's always, "with his left hand, Maddox punched her bare stomach." The writing style was so annoying I had to struggle not to just give up reading the book and put it down for good. As it was, I could only get through 60% of the story before finally deciding that knowing how it ends would not be worth slogging through the clumsy writing. The prose itself is also just boring and and commonplace. You read sentences like "Meta head-butted him, and if her forehead had connected with his nose, the fight would have been over." An author writing at a higher level would have made this more exciting, perhaps writing that "Meta snapped her forehead into his face, missing his nose by a fraction of an inch. Maddox was momentarily stunned by the force of the blow and he realized that if her strike had hit home he would have lost the fight." It appears that the author has written quite a few novels and stories, but it still seems that he could benefit from more practice and a lot more reading. The editor absolutely dropped the ball on this one.