163
people found this helpful, as of 2023
ranked #203,406 most helpful
out of 571,544,897 reviews
★☆☆☆☆
Who's Who? Whose Whom? Whoo...oh never mind.
I'm on page 127. That's enough. I can't be bothered to try to sort out who is who at the beginning of every single chapter. And all those tiresome camp names: Caleb, Reese, Sawyer, Luna, Sutton (rhyming with Mutton, how very unfortunate...). Of course there is a Lindsey and a Bryan, there always is nowadays. So what with ALL THOSE NAMES to remember and the need to sort out yet once again who belongs to whom, I don't find much time to try to generate interest in whodunnit or whahappened. The writing is full of the common, lazy grammatical mistakes in nowadays speech (eg. "If he wouldn't uhve told me that, I wouldn't uhve...."). Ho hum.... sigh...
