Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

There is a need for an editor. There are words added without reason: "...with James running ahead with to the car." There are also words left out: "...when took in the expensive..." Who took? "...would've a million..." Need the main verb added to make any sense. And speaking of sense, the following was told to a child who spoke with a mouth full of food: "Don't eat with your mouth full." There were characters to dislike and those to like and they were well drawn considering the book is short. However, the book leaves things unfinished and in stead of tying up the loose ends, the author uses the last chapter to set up the pair for the next book. That is irritating enough but the author's comments after ending this book tries to tease us about the next one. "Sign up for an exclusive bonus chapter." "Find out what happens when Harrison and Sara tell James they're getting married." The answer to that one should have been the last chapter! So the author turns what probably would be a HEA into a CLIFF HANGER tease to get us to buy the next book. That won't be happening. I hate CLIFF HANGERS and the author ruined this story by the blatant sales move at the end of this one. I've added her name to my list of CLIFF HANGER WRITERS to avoid.