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★☆☆☆☆
Not just bad... AWFUL.
Here's the real summary: A totally overpowered main character kid that somehow knows every kind of skill you imagine from yoga to kung fu with the best body imaginable and a gigantic sexual member. Every girl he meets wants to bang him, and he does bang them, even goddesses. Tries to be litRPG-ish. Somehow building up his world creator skills involves diving into a dungeon and improving his hand-to-hand fighting skills for absolutely no explainable reason. At this point we've jumped the shark too far so I'll just hit the high points:
-The main character is an arrogant womanizing jerk (reads more like a b-grade villain)
-The main character is ridiculously, impossibly overpowered Marty Stu to the point of being beyond all belief
-The plot arc progression just makes no sense whatsoever
-The writing is total garbage (although I will say it's at least edited cleanly)
-You might as well not even have names for anyone other than the main character.
-Reads like a cheap porno script for most of the beginning, but even then the smut scenes sound like they were written by a virgin.
I bought this because I like kingdom/world builder stories as well as litRPG. I don't mind harems or smut as long as there's a decent story. I saw all the 4.5 stars and 5.0 reviews, so I think it will be OK. Wrong. Now that I look at the reviews I think they've been faked. The reviews are a sentence or two for the most part and most don't really reference anything that happens in the book. I was suckered. Save yourself. Putting this author on my do not read list.
June 2019 · Books · verified purchase