Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

she kept changing her facts, she kept changing her characters, and did nothing but confuse me. the author didn't clarify any passages of time, created zero transactions, no images, left out so many details vital to a story telling, I didn't get any more information out of the book than I did in the summary. She didn't care enough to take the time to edit; there were so many errors, grammatical, spelling, structure, she skipped words... I understand this could very well be her own story, but if she wanted her story to be told that badly, why is she not putting the effort to try to make the reader understand the feeling, the detail of it all. This had some good potential but the way she jumped around with it... it just wasn't good.