Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

Worst. Writing. Ever. Aghast, I reached for a red pen. The redundancy, overuse of pronouns (5 or 6 per sentence at times), vacuous non-descriptions and verb issues (tense shifts, passive voice, missing helpers) drove me crazy. By the way, Annie requires plastic surgery to replace that constantly gnawed-off corner of her lip (top? bottom? left?right?). The predictable plot and cardboard characters completed the flatline. ps. Tip for success: never hire a friend as a divorce lawyer.