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Now these two are past 25 yrs old and have worked at 3 sites but when they finally speak to each other they speak and act like k
After reading some of the glowing reviews, I have to wonder if there is a glitch in my Kindle, is this a very young author, what gives? I was expecting a very cute fantasy story, granted, but it should make sense for the characters and their identities This book is full of inane dribble and inconsistencies. There are too many instances to quote but here are a couple: At first we are told Tavish grew up completely immersed in the Medieval life via Renn Faires; then we are informed he is a time traveler who has actually been to the "Old Time" and has lived and trained there . But yet he does not know Druids have ceremonial robes or that Druids are Celtics? He disappears from Kelsey's life for 7 years and yet he has been a nosy construction worker on every last one of Kelsey's Scottish digs for 3 months and somehow this is her first dig? Now these two are past 25 yrs old and have worked at 3 sites but when they finally speak to each other they speak and act like kids? They are going through a teetering tower house that is a few hundred years old and Kelsey the professional Archaeologist wonders if it was a party house?? Later the same professional Archaeologist and another professional (who also has a doctorate) get offered site trailers. Are they concerned about it accommodating all the complex and sensitive equipment? No, they want built-in expresso makers and specifically want a blue trailer? A Blue trailer- really? What a demeaning line to attribute to full grown professional women. Come on, I like a good fantasy but I want well developed characters, who speak and act like the characters they are supposed to be. I want well thought out layers and transitions - not mystery characters vaguely referred to as "they".
March 2017 · Kindle Store · verified purchase
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