236
people found this helpful, as of 2023
ranked #125,023 most helpful
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★☆☆☆☆
If I could give it zero stars I would
To be honest I ONLY read to 30%. I just couldn't take the immaturity any longer. Now I use the F word ALOT! but this author used the dumbest foul language I have ever read. If the female character were 14 it might be believable but at her age, it was seriously ridiculous. I loathe authors that use language or sex gratuitously, it has to at least have A purpose in the story. Most of the language had me eye-rolling and I won't even go into the 1st sex scene(by herself). It was just plain weird. I struggled to get to 30% knowing reading more would have the same language and judging from other reviewers the sex scenes would NOT be on an adult level. The author should have made this a YA without sex. Most young boys would have giggled at the language. I suppose if you are a younger reader all of this would be enjoyable and garner all the five stars but as an older reader I expect more.
October 2021 · Kindle Store · verified purchase