Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

I truly don't understand all of the high ratings for this book. The first chapter was mostly a turn off. I find the main character to have zero personality. Grammatical issues all over, run-on sentences that change subject several times everywhere. And while there are the run-on issues. there are also incomplete thoughts that don't make even simple sentences. A good editing could cut the length of this book in half. Will probably not finish as it is too annoying to read.