Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

So if you were raised by a powerful witch your entire life and your sister died and you needed help solving it would you not call on her for aid? The heroine literally had a powerful witch at her disposal that she could have used to be her mentor in witchcraft and to learn how to defend herself but nope she decided to be stubborn and secretive. The secretive part would’ve have bothered me so much if she knew how to defend herself and had reasoning skills. Everytime she runs into one of the sin demons she’s reduced to kelly. She doesn’t know how to properly defined herself yet continue to put herself in situation where her life is in jeopardy. I’m all for courageous heroines but this trend of giving a heroine courage but no company sense is aggravating as a reader. Your sister dies and your granny is warning you. What do you do? You decide to pursue every lead with no basic with training that could get you killed. With not even a weapon or use the other main character as back up. Also can we stop with the instalove plots? When did they have time to develop feelings. They had a few conversations but nothing deeply personal. The author had a chance to redeem herself with the poor heroine and could’ve given us an expansive history of the love interest. I see numerous directions she could’ve taken it from the tattoos, to the lord, and even customs where he’s from. Instead we’re provided with instalove and little to know backstory. The story unfortunately was slow with pacing and did not develop the characters enough for me to be invested in the sequel.