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This book was recommended to me because I am such a huge fan of the Inheritance series from Christopher Paolini. First off, misleading name since there is only one dragon, seen only twice. Other than that dragons/dragon lore is only mentioned a handful of times. This story was more about Kyra becoming a woman than dragons. Good idea, poor execution. Many grammatical errors. Poor sentence structures throughout entire story. Too many repetitions of statements and explanations. Really glad I got this book for free. I give the author credit for trying to create this story, but he should have really had a professional editor help him. Some vocabulary does not match the time period and detracts from the story line. I wish the characters were more developed and actually involved in each others plot. I'm sure they will come together in his later books, but I will not be reading them any time soon.
September 2015 · Kindle Store · verified purchase