Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

I am so embarrassed that I bought this book. It is badly written, badly edited, and badly outlined. There is the potential for a decent story here and some characters with promise but Oh Dear God - when vial is spelled "vile" and haul is spelled as "hall" you just know that its going to get worse. The lead female character ranges from shy, innocent, shining with goodness who has no idea just how beautiful she is (come ON ladies, how many females do you know who have no idea of what they look like or what their impact is on the opposite sex??? Zero right?) To the pole dancing drugged out potential lap dancer looking for revenge. I mean this is the best the evil king can do? Drug the girl up and twirl her around? Oh the horror! But the ending, the ending is just the worse - everything goes completely off the rails. The focus, the characters the intensity, logic of some kind. Characters just pop up (And by the way how is it that a race of insanely beautiful elves just fall off the turnip truck over the drugged out human??? Presumably the weaker, lesser race...sigh.... I understand the whole Chosen thing but when some Tom, Puck, or Elvish just decides that He Must Have You!...why? Just when the story should be building to a crescendo it just dies and lies there like a sad sad piece of noodle. Which is how I felt when I realized that 2.99 just went down the tubes...... Save Your Money - I'll send you my copy.