Bests & Worsts Reviews from Amazon

I'm sorry but I'm having such a hard time with this book. I know you don't have any children but your editor or anyone who reads your books should have called this out when proofing this story. The dialogue of the younger Harley and Jackson characters absolutely appalling. Don't get me wrong, I know children speak differently when they aren't surrounded by adults but NO 6 or 7 year old speaks the way you have written Harley and Jackson. At 6 and 7 years old you are insinuating that they know about how big someones "dick" is or about "balls" dropping. Have you hung out with a 6 or 7 year old? It doesn't matter who their parents are, this isn't how a 6 or 7 year old speaks. Then let's fast forward to 9 and 10. Again, sexual comments between two little kids. What were you thinking? I'm all about telling the story about them when they were younger but PLEASE stop turning your books in child porn. I'm so over this with you as an author. You are good at writing and I do really like your books but lately you are crossing several lines that i just can't deal with anymore. I wanted to love this book but I can't. I can't take part in something so disgusting and so inappropriate that include young children.