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It sounds like it might become a great story but the errors ...
Please get this book edited! It sounds like it might become a great story but the errors (Alton become Aton) (trail become trial). I will try again if it gets edited at least once (these errors were in the first few pages) !! Too distracting. Try again - Same page - (Jeffrey becomes Jeffery). Ugh. I'll slug on for a while longer.
