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JINKIES! When did Kate O'hare morph into Velma Dinkley?
There are so many problems with this book, I’m just going to bullet point them;
• Fire the son.
• They took out the romance between Kate and Nick.
• Jake is the strong silent dumb type?
• An agent on Cosmo Uno’s level would never be allowed in the field with an agent of Kate’s caliber. EVER.
• Fire the son again. The writing is a 180 degree turn around compared to previous books. There is no flow. The conversations are immature.
• Nick comes off as smarmy not suave. More Neal Caffrey less Justin Hammer.
• Kate is NOT a shrew. She wouldn’t knock Cap’n Crunch out of Nick’s hands.
• Nick would never let Cosmo into Kate’s apartment.
• This is a rip-off of Jack Reacher.
• Why give a new author an established series. His writing “voice” is completely wrong for these characters.
• I’m only on Chapter 5. I had to stop reading it. I want my money back.
