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ranked #240,241 most helpful
out of 571,544,897 reviews
★☆☆☆☆
Ridiculous
How many of the 5 stars are readers under 30? Being a more mature reader at 55% I gave up. Right off the bat using the word Dad! Fantasy, PNR, this type of book you never use the word Dad, only father which the author switched too. The dialogue in this book was just plain ridiculous, might as well have been written by a 13-year old boy. The first sex scene was so juvenile. This is my first and last book by this author. Could have used a good editor also. Very disappointing for 7.99. If you attempt fantasy or PNR I highly suggest reading some GREAT authors like Sarah Maas or Jennifer Armontrout. Just because you make a list doesn't mean your GOOD it only means that young readers find your immature writing worthwhile.
