524
people found this helpful, as of 2023
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★★☆☆☆
This is not a complete book!
Books that don't finish the story, and leave you hanging should be clearly labelled.
So, know going in that you need to spend $8 to read the whole story. that in itself would not be a problem, as long as the description clearly states that. However, when I pay $8 for a book, I expect professional editing.
This story wasn't terrible, but it certainly ranked high on the NFW (no freaking way) scale. It also does contain a fair number of typos and errors.
Paying $2 - 3 for the full story, (edited 10/7/17: the story now has many books and costs close to $30) (which of course includes 2 other "books"), would be more reasonable. As it is, I won't buy the next two, it just isn't written well enough to justify the cost.
