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First kindle book I’ve ever returned for a refund
This book reads like a easily distracted, low attention span writer decided they could write fantasy without reading fantasy. I’m all for originality, but this style of writing is so far removed that it might as well be someone with severe ADHD trying to shop for groceries - unpredictable, unfollowable, confusing as hell to anyone with a sense of logical flow.
It’s almost like listening to some trip on acid. Lots of imagery and color, but no overarching meaning.
In short, this book has no identifiable plot, not a single substantial character (they are all shallow, but flashy), and is randomly narrated from third person, experienced from first person and jumps from one character to another so fast you don’t know who is doing what or even the characters location at many points. Bad form.
September 2018 · Kindle Store · verified purchase