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" My little body shuttered from the unexpected sound." "I pranced to the front door." No one walks in this book. If a character isn't prancing she's skipping, trotting, strolling, traipsing, scurrying, scampering, creeping, hopping or lurking. True, lurking means to wait but in this book it becomes a form of motion. "Her lean physique approached my direction with purpose." This sentence speaks for itself. "I slid from the fluffy sanctuary." Most of us refer to this as a bed. Four paragraphs were devoted to her laying her towel on the beach sand. That was memorable, especially since it had nothing to do with the story and was never mentioned again! Thirteen pages were needed to describe the first few moments of meeting between Sadie and the strange boy! Most of it was her explaining how she immediately fell in love with him even though, they "barely knew each other." Barely? They knew each other about 2 minutes. In all fairness, the book may have improved but I only made it through a third before giving up.